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making new friends
Making new friends can be really easy. Many people have problems making new friends because they dont know how to aproach someone. To make new friends you need to start a conversation, keep the conversation going, stay friends with them, while also being a good friend and know what to do and what not to do.
Starting a conversation is really easy. you can comment about something arounf you (like the weather,) ask someone for help, or by complimenting them. To keep the conversation going you can ask them questions and make small talk. Don't make anything to serious. Talking about different topics will make the conversation more interesting. Towards the end you should tell them you name.
A lot of them time people will have one conversation with someone but then never talk to them again. To stay friends with someone you should ask if they want to hang out, and give them your phone number so you can keep in touch. Instead of ignoring them in the hall, say hi.
Once ou are friends with them, you need to be a good friend. Remember important information that they tell you (name, birthday, likes and dislikes.) Be interested in what they say and pay attention. If they are talking and your texting on your phone or not looking at them, they will feel like your ignoring them. Be reliable. If you say you will do something, then do it. Its very important to be trustworthy. Keep their secrets and be honest. Be there when they need you.
Things you should do are, be positive, smile, keep eye contact, laugh, be confident, and be yourself. People don't like fake friends. Things that you shouldnt do are buy your friends by giving them gifts or money. Dont be selfish. Talking about yourself too much will make people not want to be around you. Dont leave a friend because you like another friend better, and dont try to change yourself because you want to fit in with your new friend.
Making new friends is easy if you really try. To make new friends you need to start a conversation, keep talking to that personm be a good friend, and know what to do and what not to do. If you be a good friend, then you can make many new friends.
if i made a bunch of typos its because i typed it fast and didnt fix anything because i dont need to.
Thanks:]How can i change this essay from 2nd person to 3rd person?
Making new friends can be really easy. Many people have problems making new friends because they dont know how to aproach someone. To make new friends ONE NEEDS to start a conversation, keep the conversation going, stay friends with them, and know what to do and what not to do.
Starting a conversation is really easy. ONE can comment about something around ONE (like the weather), ask someone for help, or COMPLIMENT HIM OR HER. To keep the conversation going ONE can ask questions and make small talk. ONE SHOULD NOT make anything to serious. Talking about different topics will make the conversation more interesting. Towards the end ONE should GIVE ONE'S name.
MANY TIMES people will have one conversation with someone but then never talk to them again. To stay friends with someone ONE should ask if THE PERSON WANTS to hang out, and give HIM OR HER ONE'S phone number so ONE can keep in touch. Instead of ignoring SOMEONE in the hall, say hi.
Once ONE IS A FRIEND OF SOMEONE, ONE SHOULD to be a good friend. Remember THE important information that THE FRIEND TELLS(name, birthday, likes and dislikes.) ONE SHOULD BE interested in what THE FRIEND SAYS and pay attention. If THE FRIEND IS talking and ONE IS texting on ONE'S phone or not looking at THE FRIEND, HE OR SHE will feel IGNORED. ONE SHOULD BE reliable. If ONE PROMISES TO do something, then ONE SHOULD do it. Its very important to be trustworthy. ONE SHOULD keep A FRIEND'S secrets and be honest. ONE SHOULD ALSO BE there when ONE IS NEEDED.
Things ONE should do are, be positive, smile, keep eye contact, laugh, be confident, and be ONESELF. People don't like fake friends. Things that ONE shouldnt do INCLUDE ''BUYING' ONE'S friends by giving them gifts or money. ONE SHOULD NOT be selfish. Talking about ONESELF too much will KEEP PEOPLE AWAY. ONE SHOULD NOT leave a friend because ONE LIKES another friend better, and ONE SHOULD NOT try to change ONESELF because ONE WANTS to fit in with ONE'S new friend.
Making new friends is easy if ONE really TRIES. To make new friends ONE NEEDS to start a conversation, keep talking to that person, be a good friend, and know what to do and what not to do. If ONE IS a good friend, then ONE can make many new friends.
How can i change this essay from 2nd person to 3rd person?
put in like we first person sentence starters
Why don't you substitute the you's with he's or she's? or you can do for example: ';Towards the end he/she can keep in touch.';
You need to get ';you'; out of there. Instead of saying, ';Starting a conversation is really easy. you can comment about something arounf you (like the weather,) ask someone for help, or by complimenting them.'; try:
Starting a conversation is easy. Sharing observations such as the weather or the scenery can be a good way to begin a conversation. Asking someone for help or offering compliments about a person's outfit or jewelry can also work as springboards.
The thing you want to avoid is using personal pronouns like ';you.'; Be more general. Don't say, ';If you're a good friend you can make new friends.'; Make it general: Good friends make new friends easily.
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