What do you think of my poem?

pretend your in a bath of blood.

and all to save you is high above.

your sinking under with nothing to say.

waiting for a knight in armor to save the day.



you caused the pain on yourself.

you put your heart on a high shelf.

you have no way of getting out.

you've sunken so low, with a since of doubt.



how do you change yourself?

with out the tiniest bit of help!

what your last resort with mean the end.

when you have no one to say good bye to, not even a friend.What do you think of my poem?
This is a good poem, keep writing poem and you can get even better :)What do you think of my poem?
creepy, but my mind wondered off into it. really good! keep it up! u sound like my friend...