What's appropriate material for my story?

My story is geared towards fifteen and older people. The content in the story has religion, race, political and satirical issues. It also has a great amount of curse words and vulgarity. Is it an overkill if I kill a character (minor), have a couple that engages in oral sex, have another couple thinking about it, and a girl who's too chicken to do anything. It's supposed to be about drama and how a death of a person and being molested could change yourself and make you see a therapist.What's appropriate material for my story?
well, the truth is that teenagers talk to their friends about this kind of stuff. death is a real thing thing, and lots of teenagers have to deal with it. swearing isn't really thought twice about anymore, swearwords are being shouted all the time at school. sadly, teenagers deal with all of that stuff... but i think that when it comes to writing your story you could cut out some the sex stuff and tone down the swear words because reading it is sometimes different to actually experiencing it.



have a focus in your story. i like to think of it as a flash meal, you have the antre, main course, desert, and then little refreshments and side dishes. so pick one or two of those things and then make the other things small. make it flow. i think yours would be good in first person: the character being you.



Good luckWhat's appropriate material for my story?
Although it will turn some people off, it would be alright to write about these things as long as you don't over do it constantly to the point of it becoming a nuisance. However, you should provide some sort of theme within the novel, that way there's a purpose for you to write about this.



Btw, I need feedback on my novel if you have time

http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=10193
That sounds really good. Well, not good, but you know, interesting. I'd definitely read it, and I'm not fifteen yet.

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